The Official Writing Challenge
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08/05/06
Interesting take on the banishment from Eden. Nicely done and held my attention.
This was really good! I
enjoyed reading your story,
and the characters came alive!
You might want to continue
telling this story - at
another point of His Story.
God Bless!
Your title in itself is very striking and took on so much more meaning once I'd read your story. A unique portrayal. Thanks for sharing.
08/08/06
I often wondered what happened right after the banishment - this was VERY intriguing!! What a creative approach to the topic, and to this part of bible history! I really enjoyed this.
08/08/06
I really enjoyed this take on life after Eden. Creative and wonderful!!