The Official Writing Challenge
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08/05/06
A nicely rewritten Bible story that is very well done; but personally, I've always wondered "WHO" would have fed them IF Martha had done the same as Mary? - But, who am I to second-guess a Bible Story? Just a quirk of the human mind, I guess. (I keep remembering that we are made of dust) Thanks, I enjoyed the read!
08/05/06
To sit at the feet of Jesus - good retelling of a familiar story. Nicely done.
08/06/06
You described Martha's thoughts and feelings and frustrations well, and I can relate to her. Well done. I'd be interested in seeing you turn it around and write it from Mary's perspective now.