The Official Writing Challenge
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WOW! This was right on! Great job on writing a so-much-true devotional about coming back to God and His truths rather than the popular cultural realism, tolerance garbage, I'm OK, You're OK lie!
08/04/06
I can identify with the mix of secular and spiritual thinking that is so prevalent today. I am challenged by the teaching points that you have made.
08/05/06
Your piece reminded me that "now we see as through a mirror, darkly, but then we will see face to face." Yes, we're all in figurative steam down here but it will clear up when we get to our final destination. Good work!
08/09/06
Thanks for sharing this inspiration devotional/teaching. The message is certainly one to be taken to heart.
08/10/06
You did a good job with this, and led it nicely to the end. This was my favorite line: "Ever thought tithing might be cheaper?"
You were missing a few commas throughout the piece. The easiest way I find to teach where one puts commas is this: if you were reading it, put a comma wherever you would stop to breathe.