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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Work (07/27/06)

TITLE: Just a Carrot?
By Helen Paynter
07/30/06


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The expression on the novice’s face could have curdled cream. He heaved a sack onto the kitchen table and slit it open with an aggressive swipe of his knife. Muddy carrots spilled onto the table and floor.

The elderly monk gave a brief glance at the damage. Without comment he selected a carrot and silently began to peel it. The novice hacked at one with impatient jabs.

Five despoiled carrots later, he could contain his frustration no longer. ‘I can’t believe they’ve got us wasting our time doing this!’

‘Wasting our time?’ the monk looked up in mild surprise. ‘I’m sorry you feel that way. But this is no waste of my time. This is my vocation, mon frère.’

‘No, your vocation is following God. How can you do that when you’re stuck here peeling vegetables while everyone else is at Compline?’ The novice scowled at his elder.

The monk shook his head, his eyes gentle. ‘No, mon frère, you’ve missed the point. If I serve God as I work, the work itself becomes an act of worship. I am missing out on nothing.’

The novice pointed with his knife in emphasis. ‘How can peeling a carrot be worship? It’s just a carrot, for heaven’s sake!’

The elderly monk took a carrot in his hands and hands and appraised it reverently. Grasping his knife, he began to pare it neatly. Finally, he took the fresh, glistening vegetable and sniffed it, his eyes closed.

‘Just a carrot? I am on a journey with God every time I peel one. Minute by minute he shows me his goodness. Hour by hour I bless him for his provision.’

The novice examined a carrot for a minute, turning it in his hands as if seeking some secret it concealed . Finally, he tossed it back onto the pile in disgust. ‘No, monsieur, you’re wrong. If I had to work here all the time, I’d be bored beyond words. But you – you must have been here for months!’

A wry smile came over the monk’s face. ‘Bored? Perhaps you would. I thought so, too, when I started in this kitchen twenty-three years ago. But this I have learned: my faith is meaningless if it cannot find its expression in the mundane.’ He sliced off the ferny heads of four carrots with a neat stroke. ‘The simplicity of the task is a blessing. It allows me to see God with uncluttered eyes.’

The novice opened his mouth to reply, but bit his tongue. There followed a respectful silence, broken only by the gentle whittling of two knives.

Finally, the younger man’s impatience took the upper hand. ‘Yes, I would be bored – and miserable. As I am now.’ He threw down his knife and rubbed his sleeve across his eyes.

The elderly monk hobbled round the table and laid a chapped hand on the other’s arm. ‘What makes you think you know more about happiness that God does, mon ami?’ He spoke softly. ‘You have found what is important while you are still young. Me, I wasted many years searching for happiness and finding only emptiness. See, you are ahead of me already.’

He took a carrot and placed it into the novice’s hands, guiding his knife until a perfect strip of skin coiled away and spun to the floor. Still holding the young man’s hands, he looked earnestly into his eyes.

‘Make no mistake, mon frère, this is not just a kitchen – it is a sanctuary. You said this was just a carrot. No, mon ami, it is much more than that. It is a sacrament. It mediates the presence of God to me. And I am content.’



Based on the true story of Brother Lawrence, who spent 40 years ‘practicing the presence of God’ in the kitchen of a Carmelite monastery.


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david grant08/04/06
I came back to this one after moving on to the next entry because in a way I'm pealing carrots right now. Thank you for sharing this. I am very encouraged.
Marilyn Schnepp 08/05/06
What beautiful thoughts from the older and wiser one. Time does have a way of seeing beauty in the most mundane circumstances. Who can ever forget that beautiful and life saving "carrot" that Scarlet O'Hara found at Tara in "Gone With the Wind"?! (I thought it a radish, but I've been told it was a carrot) - but no matter - we got the picture! Very creative story. Well done.
Virginia Gorg08/05/06
Good article - now I need to reconsider my 'mundane' job. I like this line: expression in the mundane. I have learned something from this article. Thank you :)
Cristy Zinn08/05/06
I really enjoyed reading this - I wish we would take more time to listen to the wisdom of those who have more experience in their faitj and more wisdom because of it! This makes me want to strive to praise God in EVERY circumstance. Thank you.
Joanne Sher 08/07/06
I think most EVERYONE needs to read this story at some time or another - many more than once (me included!). This is wonderfully done. You bring both of these characters to wonderful, vivid life!
Allison Egley 08/07/06
A nice gentle reminder that everything is God's work.
Jen Davis08/07/06
A lovely story and an important reminder to us. I especially enjoyed the 11th and the final paragraph. Very well done.
Brenda Craig08/07/06
Thank you for this story. This is a wonderful confirmation of other things this week. I love to read Brother Lawrnece. I have the book. Maybe you wrote this just for me:) Great job!!
Suzanne R08/08/06
Very good ... I too love the story of Brother Lawrence and you did him justice too.

What a fantastic first line!!!
Tracey Jackson08/08/06
I just knew as I started to read that you were describing Brother Lawrence and his book "Practicing His Presence." You did it so well! A great piece!
Venice Kichura08/09/06
I guess Brother Lawrence, too! Excellent piece on how this dear saint practised the presence of God in his daily work.
T. F. Chezum08/09/06
I'll agree with Joanne, everyone needs to read this story. Excellent writing.
william price08/10/06
Excellent job! Congrats on win. Well deserved.
Rita Garcia08/10/06
Helen, congratulations, I am so happy this story got the recongition it deserved!!
Jessica Schmit08/10/06
Congrats Helen. I was so thrilled to see that the other judges also so this as a masterpiece. welcome to Masters!

Oh, and it was so difficult keeping this a secret!
Sue Dent08/10/06
*chanting* Go Helen, Go Helen, it's your Birthday-it's your Birthday! If you don't get it, it's an american thing for CONGRATULATIONS! A well deserved wint!!
Marty Wellington 08/10/06
Stupendeous story, Helen. I always enjoy hearing of the contemplative life. We can learn so much from this simple lifestyle.


   
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