The Official Writing Challenge
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08/05/06
Good comparison the charmless house to the mud thatches - and a good follow through. Nice story - see, our work is never done!
08/05/06
Such a lovely story; I really enjoyed it. However, since it is in Advanced, I can mention a tiny flaw I noticed..."not a flower in sight"; unless you meant "not a flower ON site"; but either way, the story was great and very well written. Thank you.
08/07/06
hummmm...missionaries never die, they just redecorate thier lives
Yes, this is lovely!