The Official Writing Challenge
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08/05/06
Lots of truth in this about the importance of forgiveness. Well written, good flow. The personal story turned testimony. Thanks.
08/06/06
As to the woman you admired and had a difficult time forging - why wouldn't you have gone to this woman and asked her pointblank IF she did indeed say these things? Who knows? They could have lied about her? Who knows? But face to face is sometimes best way to handle situations - and apologizing face to face seems to heal.
08/06/06
Sorry, "forgiving" is the word, not "forging"; and this is a well written story - thanks for sharing. Just trying to be a "Dear Abby" as you asked for a book on the subject...(smile) suggesting a solution.
08/12/06
Dolores, I judged for the "work" topic and was very blessed by this piece. I gave you a perfect score for the message, and it scored high overall. I'd like to give you the famous, well-used suggestion, "Show, don't tell." This will bring your work to life and bring the reader into your story. Blessings!