The Official Writing Challenge
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08/03/06
Interesting piece, easy to read, but I think you should have narrowed the story down to one character witnessing incident that showed Joe's witness. You had the opportunity in a couple of places. Would have been great to see him sweat and come up shining on his bad day.

08/05/06
Easy to read story that shows a person's true faith, even when fired. Seemed a bit long, though - I like the above suggestion of narrowing it down a bit. A few typos near the beginning. Overall nice.