The Official Writing Challenge
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08/03/06
Yikes! What a message. Good write up.
08/05/06
Riveting final paragraph! If only more preachers would teach on hell (after all, Jesus did)...... Nicely done, held my attention, and kept me reading.
08/07/06
I agree, this is a message that should be preached far more often. I should have seen the ending coming, but I didn't. Great story! Great ending! Good work!
08/07/06
sudden, abrupt, but appropriate ending...kind of makes me think "writing without faith"...since that's how God spoke to us. I wonder if God feels that we are stealing if we try a peice of writing without inviting faith and love principles in?
08/08/06
Creative, unique and it worked for me! Made me think, ponder and re-evaluate life. Great write, and interestint read. Thanks!
08/09/06
WOW! This gave me chills! Excellent work - and congrats on your Davey! It is well deserved!!!
08/10/06
Congrats on your 2nd place. Very, very good job!!