The Official Writing Challenge
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08/02/06
A good story and a well written piece. Your dialogue was very natural and flowed well. It's awesome how he was able to use his injury to share God with others. Well done.
08/03/06
Congratulations, wonderful story!
Congratulations Bonnie, this is a wonderful story.
Cngratulations, you made EC! Yippee! This is delightful, Bonnie! I like the way you sandwiched the flashback between the precious dialogue with Grampa and grandson. The end was particularly strong . . . Humorously pointed lesson. Great stuff--looking forward to more from you!