The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed this poem. I particularly liked the verse

"God didnít tell us
To read and to yearn
Without then applying
The lessons weíve learned"


This so neatly sums up such an important truth - one that especially readers like me need to learn, and keep on re-learning.

Congratulations on winning only 1 of 2 Daveys at this level! Well done!!
08/01/06
I liked this too - and especially loved the same stanza as Stephen did. Very thoght-provoking - and congrats on the Davey!!
I really like this! It was fun to read and gave an excellent lesson. Awesome Job. One of my favorites forsure.
08/02/06
Absolutely delightful in every way. I loved this and what a lesson. God is about living life.
08/03/06
A sound lesson in a beautiful poem. Thanks for the reminder.