The Official Writing Challenge
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07/27/06
Oh, very sweet! I like the "A man who..." sentences toward the beginning, and the fact that he practiced kneeling until he got it right for his proposal. A lovely story, and a perfect ending.
07/28/06
A really great love story - and written nicely. I liked it.
07/29/06
WOW! I love the way you wove this love story. You not only gave a glimpse of the past, and shared the present, but you also gave us a glimpse of the future walks the two would take together. Master writing all the way!
08/01/06
I agree with the above comments. A wonderful love story that did not dwell on the pain and the agonies, but on the overcoming of them, through love and perseverance. Very skilful writing. Thanks for sharing.
08/01/06
Beautiful story! The hopeless romantic in me sang through the entire thing - and that's not an easy reaction to get out of me.
08/01/06
A wonderful love story. I liked the line: "...in love with a whole man." This story is perfect for the topic. Well done.
08/01/06
Oh, what a beautiful love story! The emotions come through amazingly well, and you definitely got to my mushy heart!!!
08/02/06
Such a tender, courageous story. Yes, the ladies like it. This lady likes it. Well, well done!