The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, very sweet! I like the "A man who..." sentences toward the beginning, and the fact that he practiced kneeling until he got it right for his proposal. A lovely story, and a perfect ending.
A really great love story - and written nicely. I liked it.
WOW! I love the way you wove this love story. You not only gave a glimpse of the past, and shared the present, but you also gave us a glimpse of the future walks the two would take together. Master writing all the way!
I agree with the above comments. A wonderful love story that did not dwell on the pain and the agonies, but on the overcoming of them, through love and perseverance. Very skilful writing. Thanks for sharing.
Beautiful story! The hopeless romantic in me sang through the entire thing - and that's not an easy reaction to get out of me.
A wonderful love story. I liked the line: " love with a whole man." This story is perfect for the topic. Well done.
Oh, what a beautiful love story! The emotions come through amazingly well, and you definitely got to my mushy heart!!!
Such a tender, courageous story. Yes, the ladies like it. This lady likes it. Well, well done!