The Official Writing Challenge
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07/28/06
Haven't a clue about haiku - but liked the story; and the conversation between the professor and the student. God job.
07/28/06
I like the way you molded Dr. Samuels' thoughts about the lines - creative and true about the way people read things. Nice.
08/01/06
WOW! Great dialogue, great flow and fantastic ending! Master story telling!
08/01/06
Very real! Loved the dialogue - I felt I was sitting there too. Nice way to share a message.
Kim sounds very much like me. She even shares my name. I'm telling the truth when I say this is one of my top picks this week. :)
08/01/06
I'm a huge haiku fan--and I loved this entry. The revised version is indeed far suprerior to her first effort.
08/01/06
Truly enjoyed this - the dialogue was great, and the message well done. Thanks!