The Official Writing Challenge
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07/28/06
This poem is cute. I like the way you used people from the Bible to express both the good choices and bad choices. Good job!
07/31/06
A good poem with a brisk movement in your walk with the Lord. The rhythm and pace took the reader along with it. Very well done.
This is really a good poem. Very true and well written. I just love reading the older challeges. Some of them are sooooo good.