The Official Writing Challenge
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07/28/06
Ooh, chills. :) I liked the story very much, and had to read to the end.
I noticed a couple things, like an almost double sentence - the piece would be great with a little polish.
Good job!
07/31/06
A surprise ending, but there are no end of pleasant surprises when one turns to Jesus. A very good entry.
08/07/06
Truly, Jesus never ceases to amaze us! Wonderful story.
08/11/06
I wept.