The Official Writing Challenge
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07/29/06
Some beautiful scenes depicted here. Interesting piece with a conglomoration of beauty and words.
Lovely poem! I don't know much about freestyle, so I can't give you much of a critique, but I did think the last stanza didn't flow quite right... Great job!
08/01/06
I loved this. Beautiful through and through. A masterpiece, indeed.
08/01/06
Beautiful - you have some very compelling images here. I enjoyed this!
08/01/06
Oh, how lovely! I especially love the last line. This is just gorgeous.
This was wonderful - I would have closed my eyes and pictured it, but then I would have missed reading the piece. Thank you for sharing.
I agree---very beautiful!
I liked the repetition of the line, "My Lord, my Father is here with me,..." I also loved the first stanza especially. :)
Ditto. I loved it.
08/01/06
Beautiful