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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Walk (07/20/06)

TITLE: Closure of a Masterpiece
By Pat Guy
07/24/06


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Each breath scented pure,
Of fragrant melodies distant,
We walk in silent solace,
And listen to echos of peace.
My Lord, my Father is here
with me,
on this road of transparent beauty.

He speaks as waters flow,
And smiles upon the blue,
His steps barely a whisper,
A sigh fills our space.
My Lord, my Father is here
with me,
by the river of no more thirst.

Words fit, exact, precise,
Interweave body and soul,
A Masterpiece conclusion,
A Masterpiece of Will.
My Lord, my Father is here
with me,
under the Garden's tree.

Joy reflects fathoms deep,
When He looks into my eyes,
His Moment of creation,
Now touches Hands of Light.
My Lord, my Father is here
with me,
on our way to His Glorious Throne.

'It is finished!' proclaims I AM,
A long time awaiting,
To walk with man,
once again,
To touch his face once more.
His friends, companions are here
with Him,
in this Land of all things New.













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Marilyn Schnepp 07/29/06
Some beautiful scenes depicted here. Interesting piece with a conglomoration of beauty and words.
Amy Michelle Wiley 07/31/06
Lovely poem! I don't know much about freestyle, so I can't give you much of a critique, but I did think the last stanza didn't flow quite right... Great job!
Lynda Lee Schab 08/01/06
I loved this. Beautiful through and through. A masterpiece, indeed.
Joanne Sher 08/01/06
Beautiful - you have some very compelling images here. I enjoyed this!
Jan Ackerson 08/01/06
Oh, how lovely! I especially love the last line. This is just gorgeous.
Catherine Pollock08/01/06
This was wonderful - I would have closed my eyes and pictured it, but then I would have missed reading the piece. Thank you for sharing.
Venice Kichura08/01/06
I agree---very beautiful!
Debbie Sickler08/01/06
I liked the repetition of the line, "My Lord, my Father is here with me,..." I also loved the first stanza especially. :)
Dr. Sharon Schuetz08/01/06
Ditto. I loved it.
Shari Armstrong 08/01/06
Beautiful