The Official Writing Challenge
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07/29/06
Nicely done; however, the "2" years old stands out like a sore thumb...needing to be "two" as you did with your others numbers throughout. Thanks for sharing this story.
07/29/06
Sorry: I have been informed 2 years old is proper. My mistake.
07/30/06
What a beautiful testimony to God's power in the life of your son! I so loved the part of him visiting the camp and turning that man's life around. How wonderfully God can minister through people, even at such a young age. God bless!
08/01/06
I have a tender spot in my heart for all people with disabilities, and your 6th paragraph brought a precious lump to my throat that stayed for the rest of this very moving piece.
08/01/06
So compelling - and you did a masterful job of weaving the "lesson" throughout this story that would have been compelling even without it - but was more so with it.
08/01/06
Thank you for sharing your beautiful story.
08/02/06
I agree about what a great job you did in delivering a message in a beautiful way while sharing a precious story. Good writing.