The Official Writing Challenge
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07/30/06
There is a certain mystical quality about this entry that makes the reader want to know more and as we come to the end we understand why. Interesting piece. I think you might have meant 'shuddered' in your first line; 'it's' really means 'it is' and is not really used as a possessive adjective 'its'.
07/31/06
Your telling of this story is wonderful.
07/31/06
This has a very mysterious feeling. I couldn't have stopped reading even if I wanted to. Great job. It left me wanting to hear more though.
08/03/06
Tim, go read third place in Intermediate. You and Marilyn have written "bookends" for the rest of the story! Enoch, who "walked with God" is the perfect Bible character for this challenge, and you have portrayed him very well.