The Official Writing Challenge
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Great story! I liked the way you wove the story line, using the child's steps through her life. A good read!
07/28/06
Even though I'm not a parent yet, I can relate to Alice's fears. Who wouldn't? Very realistic and down-to-earth. :-)
07/31/06
This has a lot of heart. Well crafted story. You put so much emotion in just a short amount of time and space. Great job!