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07/28/06
This is truly wonderful. A priceless piece. It seems to come from the heart and is a wonderful read. The ending was incredible. I'm betting this is a true event. Wonderful. Thanks for sharing.
07/29/06
Topnotch poetry. Loved it!
07/30/06
You touched my heart with this reminder to slow down and listen to that still small voice, "walk don't run" indeed! Wonderful!
08/01/06
This is cute and easy to read. Thank you for sharing. (:
08/01/06
Your ending brought tears to my eyes. Wonderful job.
08/01/06
It is amazing how we can tell others to slow down over and over while we are going at the speed of light! What a wonderful, well-written, poignant reminder. I love your interior poems too!
08/01/06
An enjoyable read all the way through, but I really loved the ending. Beginning with "Deep in my spirit I heard..." all the way to your last line was fantastic. Very well done.
08/02/06
How many times I find myself scribbling. Such a touching sweet story with great depth in to the truth of God. Wonderful job!
08/02/06
Easy to tell others to smell the roses.. even though we walk passed them in our haste.. A good moral in this story.. I like how you did it.. Good job.