The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh wow! I really enjoyed reading this piece. I especially liked the line about how his master had a collection traded for less than a coin! A great example of gaining the world and losing a soul!!! Please write more!
So this is Science Fiction. Eh? Not to worry - I won't critique something I do not understand...and Sci-Fi is not my cup of tea; but I assume Sci-Fi fans are elated with this masterpiece of illusion and fictional artistry. Nice going.
Congratulations! May the Lord continue to guide your quill as you write to glorify HIM!