The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/06
Very beautiful and sweet. Good dialogue and it flowed even with the explanation at the end.:)
07/20/06
What a sweet love story with so much truth and so much heart. This is one of my favorite kinds of stories..a total joy to read.
07/22/06
This is a great quote: "If you write what your soul thinks, it becomes visible, and the words become its body." Helen knew this because to communicate she had to demonstrate, and our writing should be just like this, a drama of communication. Good job!
07/25/06
Great dialogue, and it flows well, as has been said. I'd like to see this expanded! Surely there is more to both stories (the grandparents and Elaine's) we aren't seeing!
07/25/06
A wonderful story, and I love your depiction of "Soul Mates."
07/25/06
I really enjoyed this - though I would LOVE to hear more about grandma and grandpa! More detail there would make this wonderful story even more so!
An enjoyeble read. Good job.