The Official Writing Challenge
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07/21/06
The writing is great and right on topic. I don't know if I even blinked when I read it. What a frightening experience - praying for you and your husband.
07/22/06
Wow! This is certainly powerful writing on a gripping topic. I hope "Fred" agreed to let a doctor check things out!
07/24/06
Yes! Brilliant in the Writing Dept. - but lacks common knowledge in the Medical Field about heart attacks. The first is usually followed by another...and sometimes massive. (first-hand knowledge). However, "writing" is what we critique on here - and that is very good.
07/24/06
Yikes! I liked the recurring seagull motif...this is written with immediacy and skill.
07/25/06
Men?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

The men in my family would do the same ... good grief.....

Well written - I was right there with you at every moment.
07/25/06
How scary!!! But, wow - I am impressed with how well you can tell this story when it is still so fresh! I can't imagine I could get two thoughts together about something like this just a week after it happened! Praying for you, and praising the Lord for your gift of writing!
07/25/06
good article, but when I read the title..and I'm dating myself...I immediately thought of Red Skelton and his Hecliff and Grutrude routine!
07/26/06
Well written, especially for the emotion being so fresh. Good job.
07/27/06
Great story telling. Somehow knowing that it happened recently makes it that much more real. Good job. I'll be praying for "Fred" and the family.