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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Favoritism (02/28/05)

TITLE: Patrick
By Phil Naessens
03/05/05


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Favoritism is a part of life. We all have our favorite foods, favorite beverages, movies, sports, friendships and associations and all these are normal, healthy, everyday wishes and desires.

But what happens when favoritism becomes unhealthy? What happens when our personal choice of a favorite does life-long damage to another human being?

The following true story describes such favoritism.

Patrick was the eldest of two brothers by 21 monthís. It became fairly obvious to Patrick at a very early age that his younger brother Charles was his motherís favorite. It wasnít a conscious act by the mother to favor her youngest above her eldest, it was just the way it happened to be. It was also highly noticeable to everyone around this family-just never talked about-especially to the boyís mother.

The problem for Charles was that Patrick excelled in music, sports and school where he was only average, and Charles was incredibly jealous of his older brother-despite being the favorite son. Charles did everything he could to sabotage his older brothers efforts-he wanted everything for him, yet to no avail. When that didnít happen, he destroyed every good memory that Patrick ever had-cutting sporting ribbons into pieces, destroying certificates and pictures simply because of his jealousy-all the while the mother stood idly by refusing to punish her favorite son.

Charles was a very good manipulator and continually put Patrick down to other people-usually Patrickís friends and extended family members. Because he was the favorite, he knew he could get away with it as his mother always took his side in any dispute involving the two brothers, whether internally or externally.

Charles also had a great knack for becoming part of whatever Patrick enjoyed-and tried to become his older brother in every way. Charles followed his brother everywhere, insinuating his way into every facet of his brotherís life, and successfully undermining his older brotherís efforts and friendships. Patrick involved himself in sports and music as a way to escape the unfairness of favoritism- and when even that didnít free him, he quit doing the things that pleased him most-his self-esteem in tatters.

Patrick honestly tried everything he could to live in this very difficult situation and make the best of things, assisting his younger brother in gaining employment and introducing Charles to people who could help him, because Patrick felt by taking the high road and not taking a stand against this situation his mother would treat he and his brother equally, which never happened and Patrick closed himself off emotionally to the situation-and to the rest of the world.

Patrick finally left his family and never looked back. He bounced around from town to town for a few years, isolating himself from anyone who tried to get too close to him-he just didnít trust anyone enough to share his pain-or his life. He began to drink heavily and use drugs in a vain attempt to get past the pain of his past. Tragically, Patrick was found dead in a hotel room in Mobile Alabama of a drug overdose at the age of 25.

I often wonder how many children out there face the same dilemma that my friend Patrick did. It still breaks my heart when I remember how talented he was, and how he tried so very hard to be treated equally by his mother-yet it just never happened for him. He had so much going for him on the outside, but inside his heart was broken so badly that he didnít trust anyone enough to help him through it-not even God.

This tragic story is rooted in favoritism in its most destructive form-parental favoritism. Patrickís self esteem was sabotaged by sibling jealousy and a parent who unconsciously favored one son over another. Patrick could never get past the fact that it wasnít his fault that his mother loved his younger brother more then him-which destroyed him in the end.

I hope and pray it never happens again!


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donna robinson03/10/05
This was such a heartbreaking story to read. So sad that even as his friend you could not help him see God cared for him and treasured him. It had to be hard to watch him self destruct and not be able to reach out and help. Everyone handles rejection so differently. For some in this same position, they realize they couldn't control the first 18 years but can control the rest of their lives. They walk away from the hurt and build a life for themselves. i've often wondered "how and why" the differences? The people who make it seem to have found someone who told them about God and for some reason it took. So sad for the Patricks who couldn't get beyond the earthly pain of living. A heart breaking story but one that speaks clearly that not only if favoritism wrong, the damage is sometimes irrepairable.
Sally Hanan03/10/05
Sad story, I am glad you wrote it down. I hope it helps someone.
Nancy Hardy03/12/05
A vital story, as it is based in truth. You have painted a window of warning into the future. I pray readers will stop and pause, looking through the panes of your words, praying it will touch someone whose spirit has been badly bruised by the vice of favoritism. A powerful read! - Nancy