The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/06
Good free verse. Enjoyed it!
07/22/06
Separation between me and my soul? I studied on this, read it over and over...and yes, body is one thing and breath (soul) is another, so I guess they can chat; Not to worry, writer, I've never been able to understand free verse...but I did try on this one...as it intrigued me, and I desperately WANTED to "get it". Thank you.
07/23/06
It is unclear who or what the speaker is and this spoils the flow of the poem. Flesh? Spirit? Something else? That said, I particularly enjoyed the final verse, with its heavenwards ascension.
06/19/07
I really like this. I am not a huge fan of free verse...but this is beautiful and reads very well.