The Official Writing Challenge
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I really liked this down to earth writing, but I think you may have had no comments yet because readers like a fresh approach to something they already know, and this was not a unique look at the subject matter.
I don't completely agree with Sally here. Who knows why people read and don't comment? I think most get busy. For me, reading was a pleasure. Yes, the theme is the same as many of the posts here on this challenge. But what is refreshing was you trip to memory lane as you brought your own daughter home. You sensed that this was an opportunity to start teaching about God's love. And that is the point, isn't it? To find a starting point from our own experiences? To see that envy turn to love? So I had to comment to let you know I felt you come full circle here.