The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/06
I love an ending with hope. Thank you for writing this down and posting it. God is good, and works in the souls of one and all - even those who seem to have lost hope. Thank you for this little reminder.

God bless,

Kevin
07/21/06
As a former child advocate, I must say, WELL DONE!
07/21/06
Very sweet, well written. I like your approach to the 'soul' topic. Adoption certainly has an impact on the precious souls of children who need a family. Thank God for families who open up their hearts and homes in this way.
07/21/06
A very good, smooth, entertaining story. I love the subtle "wow" factor the story had. A slice of real life. God Bless.
07/23/06
The description of Sydney was a delight. However I was surprised by the ease with which the application was granted. You typically think of narrative tension when you encounter a courtroom scene.
07/24/06
Beautiful story, beautifully written, not easliy done in 750 words.