The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/06
Wow! Maxx would be proud. Very well written. Enjoyed it!
07/20/06
Hmmmmm . . . yes, you did a fine job here! You may have a future in this! ;)
07/24/06
I agree with Sue, this is captivating, keeping my interest peaked all the way through. Wonderful Job!
07/25/06
Terrific story; kept my interest throughout with vivid descriptions and captivating imagery. Nicely done!
07/25/06
Fantastic writing! Captivating from start to finish!
07/25/06
COOL!!!!!
07/25/06
Very neat! Sounds like a good plot for a whole book! You had me from start to finish.
Awesome!

Screams rent the night as it fell to its knees, this sentence is talking about the knight ?

Way to write a great entry!
I really enjoyed this story. Watch your verb tenses. I don't know if you read your writing out loud, but I've found that it helps me to check the flow, verb forms, etc.

I agree with the other comments. This could be the seed of an awesome book.