The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/06
Wow! I love this. I admire the research you must have done (unless you happen to be from Lappland!), your imagination and the way you have built your character. Well done.
07/20/06
Good story. Liked the angle.
07/21/06
Intersting story. I had to make some notes for further followup just for myself.
One things bothers me though. What makes you think Captains rest behind desks? LOL Just Kidding. A few little editing adjustments and this would have been even better. But, you managed to peak my interest. Good story.