The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/06
Absolutely moving and beautiful!

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

07/20/06
My goodness! Another top-notch week this is going to be! Wow! Just WOW!
07/20/06
Yes, indeed, "Think of Her."

Well written with a strong message woven through!
07/20/06
This poem griped me, and made me read it all the way through. Its subject is so sad. May I be more sensitive to the outcasts who I encounter, because of reading this.
07/20/06
great message and a singable poem as well. Great job!
07/20/06
A sad but well told story. Good job.
07/21/06
Sad, simply sad. Makes me wonder where the Christians were in her life... Why weren't they sharing the love of Christ?
07/21/06
Very touching and tragic...a few edits for meter would really polish this!
07/21/06
i agree with the above comments, an excellent story. I don't know enough to comment on a poems mechanics. My only constructive comment is that I wish I would have read something that discribed her being "destitute". Some visual that I could carry thru the story. But again, excellent story. God Bless.
Beautifully crafted in such few words; Congratulations.