The Official Writing Challenge
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You really made quite an impression on me with this story. You developed the setting and character well. You used good descriptive imagery. Your ending was powerful and very effective in developing the theme. I think this is a finely written piece.
07/15/06
A haughty spirit comes before a fall perhaps? I felt his girlfriend’s desperation and his embarrassment when he realized the cat was out of the bag so to speak!
07/17/06
Delightful! As always your writing is superb!!
07/17/06
An absolute delight. Excellent and very real. Great writing.
07/17/06
I love it! I used underwear as a kicker for my story, too, but yours is just ever so much more effective! One of the best applications of Scripture that I've read.
07/17/06
Ha! WAY too much pride happening there! I thought he'd be standing there with NO pants (or trousers for those who prefer that term). You know - that dream of showing up at school... served him right!
07/17/06
Perfect! I didn't read this one. (been tooooo busy) but if I had - I would have KNOWN it was yours. The gross stuff gives it away dear Lynda!

And as always - perfectly delightful in every way! *chuckle, chuckle* Don't we wish this would REALLY happen to them all? ;)
07/18/06
Tooooo funny! He had it coming! A very fun read!
07/18/06
Very cute. I think this happened to me in high school a few times. Grrr...

Dan
07/18/06
Excellent. I say it coming, but I still laughed out loud. And a brilliant ending. A big truth told with a light touch. Well done.
07/18/06
Wonderful! You captured each character's feelings (even the minor ones) just right! Wonderful lesson, well woven in. I truly enjoyed this!
07/19/06
I would have picked the author right away had I read this before the hints page - your fun-loving style of writing shines right through, Lynda! Fun! I love it!
Funny. I really enjoyed this one. Great job.
One of my favorites!
Congrats on your win Lynda!
07/20/06
Lynda, Congratulations on your EC win!
Had a chuckle when I read this one. Congrats on your EC win.