The Official Writing Challenge
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07/14/06
Having been on the receiving end of others' prayer when going through tough times, I know what you mean:
"I felt warm arms encompass me....felt comfort, joy, and peace...."

You convey your message with a sense of genuine experience. One suggestion (I make use of when writing poetry): count the syllables and compare from one stanza to the next, so they "match." With more attention to rhythm you will be a first-rate poet!
07/20/06
A beautiful heartfelt poem...and with a little work on your rhythm and rhyme, your words could move the hardest of hearts into finding out more about our One Great Friend. Nicely done.