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This is precious! I loved it.
I loved the way you described the relationship between the father and his daughter so well through his thoughts and actions. “He can always take whatever we offer and make it great” – a wonderful reminder about not needed affirmation from the crowd
This is so touching. Very honest emotions and great writing of those moments we always remember. God bless!
Very touching and nice writing! I was there watching the whole scene.
Thank you for sharing this heartwarming story! You told it beautifully!
Absolutely precious story exhibiting such real relationships and a tender hearted father. I loved it. Great job!
I loved the voice of your narrator here--so casual and readable, and full of gentle wit.
Brought tears to my eyes. I especially loved this: "He can always take whatever we offer and make it great. And in your case, He didn’t have to work that hard" - how to give a complement and glory to God at the same time. Very good.
Great advice to anyone wanting to do something for God - especially when others are around. A pure heart when ministering is a treasure. Terrific message told in a light enjoyable way. Good work
I loved the flow of this piece. There were some very funny lines too (the one about Moses was great!) Great style and well crafted. A++
Very well told story. Great job.