The Official Writing Challenge
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07/13/06
I love your descriptions! 'the sky pulls away' very vivid word choices all the way through.
07/14/06
Echo Emma's comments. Can't wait for the day!
Beautiful, just beautiful! It took my breath away. I could see every scene take place.
07/18/06
This couldn't be more perfect than it already is. You have created a sense of breathlessness in your writing that matches the subject matter. And I really relish the "me, too!" ending.