The Official Writing Challenge
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I agree! You have a great message here. Great writing!
I really enjoyed this - it really seemed to flow well, and I liked the way you kept your metaphor going throughout - just enough to pull the whole thing together, without overdoing it!
I find it amazing how your style of writing matches the passion of your content. This is really "dynamite devotions!" In the urgency of conveying your message, you have missed a few spell-checks, but otherwise this is flawless writing.