The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/06
This is a glorious meditation on the attributes of God. The first paragraph with all of the parenthetical references lacks the audience "hook" -- I'd consider rearranging this like free verse poetry. Full of glorious truth.
I love so many of the attributes of God that you have written here. This would make a wonderful contemporary Psalm. I would agree with the idea of rewriting this in the format of free verse.