The Official Writing Challenge
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07/14/06
This sounds as if it were written by a teen--good job. First line threw me for a minute...not your typical story beginning! Good tie in to your character's discovery of faith.
Great job on this piece. This is definitely a painful and often "public" yet private event of many. You conveyed the emotions well.
07/20/06
Wow, tremendous emotion in this piece. Good writing.