The Official Writing Challenge
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07/13/06
Great verbs and great voice throughout!! Sad ending. I think this was well written...I have to read it again to understand the ending though...it's me, I'm sure.:)
Ahhh...a wonderful writer who understands well the world of teens. Great work on this piece. It is well-written and remarkable piece on the results of peer pressure.
07/15/06
Great divide indeed. Too bad peer pressure rushes many to cross it prematurely. Nice job.
07/19/06
Wonderful -- probably would be a good candidate for a teen magazine. Having raised six teens to adulthood, this is the type of story that would hold their attention and at least make them stop and think. "Great" job! :)