The Official Writing Challenge
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06/22/06
Boo hoo! very real! My BIL was recently killed and the way you described the emotions was so on target! Very good writing!
06/22/06
You really nailed it--those grieving feelings. Nice job on dialog, and on creating real and sympathetic characters.
06/27/06
Great job. Nice writing. A DAVEY for you!
Deb, congratulations! A beautiful, tender piece, with the Orion theme building to a glorious conclusion. I loved this part: “If there's really no darkness in Heaven, Pam can't see stars anymore."
I'm so glad to see your wonderful wordsmanship recognized!
06/29/06
A well-deserved CONGRATULATIONS! :)
06/30/06
Congratulations! This was supurb, showing conflicting and stuggling emotions so well. Crying now, so I gotta go find a tissue. Great job!