The Official Writing Challenge
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06/22/06
Great title, and you really expertly depicted the out-of-her-hands life of Jenna Louise. Glad you gave us the open-ended, but hopeful ending.
06/27/06
I like the ending - not a perfect wrap up, but enough that the reader is left with hope for Jenna. Nicely done.
07/03/06
A great glimpse into the confused mind of a career woman ... whose career wasn't quite as she'd planned! Well done!