The Official Writing Challenge
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06/22/06
I really like the forgiveness and reconciliation at the end, although I had to read this several times to be sure I understood what had happened. A few edits for clarity and this will be a very powerful story!
06/27/06
Powerful. Great ending. Nicely written with a lot of feeling. Forgiven is such an incredible word, isn't it.