The Official Writing Challenge
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06/22/06
Well, I'll take exception to your title, because this wasn't at all difficult to read--it was a joy. Beautifully done, and I'll bet it was difficult to write! How I appreciate excellent poetry, and this is truly excellent!
06/24/06
Free verse, prose or whatever they call unrhymed poetry - has always been difficult for me to make heads or tails of (sense-wise); However, just let me say that it is beautifully done in an awesome, intricate, artistic way that had to take alot of effort, time and talent.
06/26/06
Davey, Davey, Davey! Oh, this is layers deep and delightful to ponder! Marvelously clever structure. You took the theme and plunged into it with masterful passion--my hat's off! (Whiff, sniff) Do I smell a win? ;-D
06/26/06
I almost didn't read it cause I know nothing of this style but the first few lines caught me, pulled me in and I read it all and thought wow...this was perfect!
06/26/06
I would have enjoyed reading this just from it's appearance. This was awesome.
06/26/06
Very creative and unique structure. The flow and rhythm was a smooth ride. I'm not good at critiquing poems but I know what I like, and this is wonderful. Good job.
06/26/06
Hats off to another great poem which was well worth the read.

Blessings,
Trina<><
06/26/06
Clever format, beautiful message, this is truly inspired writing.
06/27/06
Very creative, great format and style; plus, the message is strong and clear. Great job.