The Official Writing Challenge
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06/22/06
A charming story of a journey toward health...help your readers to identify more strongly with Annette by getting deeper into her head: how does her illness make her perceive the world? Show us, rather than narrating her story, and you'll draw in the readers. I really liked the lesson at the end.
06/23/06
Beautiful devotional. Good message. I like it vey much.
06/26/06
Fantastic job! Really grasped hold of the ending.