The Official Writing Challenge
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06/23/06
I really like the formatting, especially at the top. The reader is already thinking about Christmas trees before they are mentioned. Also, rhyming in pairs (couplets, I think they're called?) is tough, but you did it.
06/23/06
I also LOVE the formatting - the top and bottom and between - and yes, Christmas trees were in my mind all along. The message of this is also magnificent. I'm not expert on poetry, but I know that I love this!
Wonderful--the timeless message of grace in perfect couplets! I love it.
06/24/06
I loved your poem. I enjoyed reading it till the very end.
Great message.
06/24/06
Wonderful! This poem simply has everything a good poem should have.
Beautiful story told in such a beautiful way!
06/26/06
"Jesus Is Enough" Great title and Great story.
This was done so beautifully. Everything about it was perfect. Good job.
Great poetry. I loved it!
Very creative and a pleasure to read.

Trina<><
This is one of my favorites I've read this week. :)
06/28/06
Yep, loved the structure and story. Good job.