The Official Writing Challenge
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06/23/06
Magnificent ... the hope of life and the way she is so attuned to God ... beautiful.
06/23/06
Glorious story! I loved the Hawthorne touch, with the loons reflecting the spiritual tone throughout. You held my fascination; I've been in that scary place, too. It's indescribable when the faith wells up at His word and His confirming signs! Thanks for this!
06/24/06
There is serenity in every sentence of this marvelous story. Thank you so much for this picture of hope.
06/25/06
Beautiful! I loved the way you used the loons to set the story.
Pat Guy  
06/26/06
A breath of fresh air to read! Beautiful work, beautiful hope.
06/26/06
The reason it went so smoothly is that you were merely the instrument in God's hand when He wrote it. Truly from a Master's hand. Wonderful.
06/26/06
Wow! Amazing images! You are definitely a master at work. :-)
06/26/06
This writing is so genuine, a reader is able to experience the story as if trading places with one of the characters. The loons made a beautiful frame for the painting.