The Official Writing Challenge
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06/23/06
Interesting choice of format - this piece almost begs to be put to music. Wonderful lyrics.
06/23/06
I agree: this is so musical and romantic!
06/24/06
So, so tender and sweet. I'm imagining an old, old man writing this to his sweetheart of many years. Love it.
06/25/06
Oh, my, this is precious...beautiful. The form of this poem is just right for the bittersweet quality it carries. This poem seems simple at first, but it draws its reader into a lovely depth.