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06/22/06
Very effective use of repetition in the "I remember..." paragraphs. A very touching essay.
06/24/06
A wonderful description and rememberance of a picture perfect life, something we all hope for our families.

As a mom of two boys and a girl, who are all still pre-school age, it makes me hope and pray that I too will have the same story to tell someday.

You are blessed. Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful look at your life and family.
06/26/06
Good story. I'm living it now. A DAVEY FAV.
Great reflection on the past and the empty nest. I've been there too. It's lonely, but fulfilling.