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Very effective use of repetition in the "I remember..." paragraphs. A very touching essay.
A wonderful description and rememberance of a picture perfect life, something we all hope for our families.

As a mom of two boys and a girl, who are all still pre-school age, it makes me hope and pray that I too will have the same story to tell someday.

You are blessed. Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful look at your life and family.
Good story. I'm living it now. A DAVEY FAV.
Great reflection on the past and the empty nest. I've been there too. It's lonely, but fulfilling.