The Official Writing Challenge
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You did well with the 'show not tell' with the smell of the slave - ugh! You also set us right in the middle of the room very effectively. Great message. Well done.
This is sheer masterpiece! I am inside Matt, experiencing the surroundings through his senses. This is such a beautiful picture of the good news, of the apostle Paul, of a slave hearing for the first time the glad tidings which shall be to ALL people. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
Your story was captivating. I felt like I was there watching the whole story unfold. I can't wait to read what you write next!
Very good indeed. Love the way you developed this, and the descriptions you used.
Wow! You had my interest from beginning to end. Great scene development. I love your writing.
Very creative! Good job!
The lowly door mat now has a place in the kingdom of God. Well done.
Congratulations, Val! A well-deserved win. I'm gratified that you painted Paul so tender-hearted. The Lord surely did transform him as he grew older. What a joy to know this powerful invitation-in-a-story will be published!
Way to go Val! Great job and congrats on the win.

Congratulations, Val! A well-deserved win for a great story! I also wanted to add that your writing reminded me of Francine River's Mark of the Lion triology. I loved the series and the Roman time period. :-)

Great work!