The Official Writing Challenge
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Very creative, fleshing out the parable of the sower! I also like the slant on abundance--the way each one has an 'abundance' of whatever he deserved, according to his obedience and care of the soil. You have a beautiful simplicity in your writing style here, which makes your voice nice and strong. Thanks for this gem!
06/19/06
Great fleshing out of the parable.
06/21/06
Lovely re-telling of the parable. I'm glad you resisted the temptation to end with a little interpretation or homily - it spoke for itself very well.
06/22/06
You've managed to bring the parable to life and show that abundance has a two-fold edge to it: of good and of bad. May God continue to bless your writing skills.