The Official Writing Challenge
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Delightful story! I love the way the pastor plays devil's advocate, tricking Zeke into changing his attitude. You did a great job with the dialogue, creating the characters with a light touch, right down to the yokel accent. Great job!
Like this pastor. Liked your story. Really put the theme in perspective.
Good job.
Wonderful story. I love the way you presented the Pastor, using wisdom without appearing wise. Great work! :)
Nicely done. I liked this story, and the two voices worked well.
You did a marvellous job with this story. The two voices came through in an authentic way. I could just see it happening that way. Cleverly done.
Congratulations, Susan! Well-deserved recognitions for an outstanding piece!
Enjoyed your story right from the start. Loved the farmer being named Zeke, it's a perfect fit. Congrats!