The Official Writing Challenge
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What a "sweet" story! You have certainly captured the essence of a child's imagination!
I've been called a Candy Queen myself, so this caught my eye and what a charming read!
Very clever, cute, and super enjoyable...But all the more so because your writing is really tight and skillful here! Luscious descriptions (I could shoot you for sending me to the freezer for ice cream!), good, active verbs, tight construction. Beginning and ending strong. This one rates high in my book!
06/19/06
This is marvelous. What a clever way to address the theme. A delightful story. Great job.
06/20/06
Beautiful, light, humorous piece. I love the two voices you used and the way you constructed it. Good job.
An endearing story and delightful to read. It would go down well in a children's book of stories.